When: Summer of 2016 Where: Mall What: Shoplifting Why: Just cause I’ve picked up such a bad habit of doing it since a child Who: Me Tyler David 5 Senses: Quiet and empty, smelled quite normal I remember almost everything about the incident but I don’t remember what happened before getting to the mall
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10/10 – In class writing
Exposition: Walking into mall with 2 of my “best” friends Inciting Action: Since a kid I’ve had to steal from stores to provide for myself since my parents had me young and they were struggling to provide for themselves and I. Rising Action: The store was empty and the friends I was with spoke about …
In class writing pt 2
I have come to believe Russel Wilson will be MVP of the 2019-2020 NFL Season. I’m standing here as a 18 year old college student attending Pima Community College
10/8 – In class writing pt 1
A complete rhetorical analysis goes in depth about the text and what it contains That although the author lived through what he described throughout the speech he’s had what he’s describe happen to him By reading through my essay and looking for any grammatical errors and by adding better vocabulary to draw readers attention I …
Grammar Guide
Sentence Fragments/Complete Sentences Independent Clause: Sentence or complete thought Dependant Clause: Subordinate Conjunctions: after, although, as, as if, as though, because, before, except, if, since, though, unless, until, when, whereas Run-on Sentences Run-on sentences usually occur as comma splices or fused sentences. A fused sentence occurs when independent clauses are joined with no punctuation. A …
Final Draft
MLK “I have a dream” Analysis On August 28, 1963 Martin Luther King Jr delivered his most famous “I Have a Dream” speech where he asserts that all races should be equal. Martin Luther King develops his argument by stating examples of how the circumstances differed between colored and white people. The author’s purpose is …
10/1 – In class writing/conclusion
By using rhetorical appeals Dr.King wants to get audience on the same page as him and consider what he has to argue. The author’s purpose of this iconic speech is to show the American community that it isn’t fair to judge and mistreat someone by the color of their skin but by their character. He …
Essay 1 – 2nd Draft
MLK “I have a dream” Analysis On August 28, 1963 Martin Luther King Jr delivered his most famous “I Have a Dream” speech where he asserts that all races should be equal. Martin Luther King develops his argument by stating examples of how the circumstances differed between colored and white people. The author’s purpose is …
9/25- In class writing
Revised Thesis: Throughout my essay I will explain how Dr. King uses real life examples and multiple pathos appeals to show the audience and prove how unfair the racial treatment was at the time. Topic Sentence: Martin Luther King uses emotional examples to insure to the audience that change is urgent
9/24 – In class writing
Who is the intended audience? All of the American community at the time Discuss how the intended audience is affected by or involved in the topic being discussed. Discuss the main characteristics of this audience, including values, assumptions, experiences, and stances that work for and against the piece’s interest. The audience is affected if the …